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Wrinkles in Time Haiku

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If you count those dots
upon my back, like gray wood,
your old head will crack.

 

Six-Spotted Tiger Beetle… Photo by Thomas Peace c. 2018

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  1. brianmetters's avatar

    Nice one Tom, I must start using a tripod ….or something for my ventures into macro!

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  2. shoreacres's avatar

    Your haiku brought back our childhood superstition: “Step on a crack, break your mother’s back.” If that were true that beetle’s mother would be in serious trouble! (But I don’t think it’s true, so the beetle can keep on trucking and we can keep on admiring him.)

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